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How to Cut 10% of Your Word Count Without Losing Meaning
March 11, 2026
How to Cut 10% of Your Word Count Without Losing Meaning
March 11, 2026

Good writing often begins with the "delete" key. This guide explores the "Kill Your Darlings" philosophy, specifically within the high-stakes constraints of flash fiction. By auditing filler words, redundant phrasing, and excessive tagging, writers can shed 10% of their word count to uncover a leaner, more impactful, and professional narrative.

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March 11, 2026
Common Dialogue Punctuation Mistakes (Even Good Writers Make)
March 4, 2026
Common Dialogue Punctuation Mistakes (Even Good Writers Make)
March 4, 2026

Dialogue is the most effective tool for immediately hooking a reader, provided the mechanics don't get in the way. By emphasizing that dialogue should appear as early as the first or second line of a story, the piece shifts into a masterclass on the technical precision required to keep readers immersed.

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March 4, 2026
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Line Editing Sentences
March 12, 2025
Line Editing Sentences
March 12, 2025

Learn how line editing refines prose, strengthens impact, and enhances storytelling by fixing cluttered sentences, weak syntax, and pacing issues.

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March 12, 2025
Building a Proper Scene
February 26, 2025
Building a Proper Scene
February 26, 2025

A great literary scene is more than describing a setting. It’s all about action, mood, and character in motion to convey a deeper sense of meaning. Learn how to craft immersive, engaging scenes that captivate readers!

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February 26, 2025
Thinking About Feelings – Narrative Intention in Storytelling
February 19, 2025
Thinking About Feelings – Narrative Intention in Storytelling
February 19, 2025

A great story isn’t just about what happens. Good authors know how stories make readers feel. Learn how to use narrative intention to craft emotional, unforgettable fiction.

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February 19, 2025
Structuring Short Stories: Finding the Beginning, Middle, and End in Limited Space
February 12, 2025
Structuring Short Stories: Finding the Beginning, Middle, and End in Limited Space
February 12, 2025

A great short story grabs fast, builds tension, and ends with impact. Learn how to structure yours for maximum effect—all in limited space!

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February 12, 2025
What is a Short Story?
February 5, 2025
What is a Short Story?
February 5, 2025

A short story isn’t just a tiny novel — it’s a punchy, powerful narrative that delivers impact in limited words. Learn how to craft one like a pro!

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February 5, 2025
Common Spelling Mistakes in the Era of Autocorrect
January 30, 2025
Common Spelling Mistakes in the Era of Autocorrect
January 30, 2025

Autocorrect isn’t perfect! Discover how to catch common spelling mistakes, boost your skills, and avoid relying too much on technology.

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January 30, 2025
Inclusive Language in Fiction Writing
January 28, 2025
Inclusive Language in Fiction Writing
January 28, 2025

Inclusive language makes your writing welcoming and impactful. Discover simple grammar tips for gender-neutral storytelling that resonates with everyone!

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January 28, 2025
Dissonance in Literature
January 23, 2025
Dissonance in Literature
January 23, 2025

Dissonance in literature is a double-edged sword. Learn how to avoid reader confusion and use intentional dissonance to elevate your storytelling.

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January 23, 2025
The Power of Conflict in Short Stories
January 21, 2025
The Power of Conflict in Short Stories
January 21, 2025

Discover why conflict is the lifeblood of storytelling and learn how to craft gripping central conflicts that make your short stories unforgettable.

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January 21, 2025
Tension in Storytelling: The Secret Sauce
January 16, 2025
Tension in Storytelling: The Secret Sauce
January 16, 2025

Tension is the lifeblood of storytelling! Let’s explore 8 types of tension to captivate readers and bring your stories to life. Ready to level up your craft?

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January 16, 2025
Creating Suspense and Layering Tension
January 14, 2025
Creating Suspense and Layering Tension
January 14, 2025

Keep readers on the edge of their seats! Learn how to craft suspense by layering tension, teasing curiosity, and building high-stakes moments in your story.

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January 14, 2025
Avoiding Top-Heavy Stories: The Problem with Front-Loaded Descriptions
January 9, 2025
Avoiding Top-Heavy Stories: The Problem with Front-Loaded Descriptions
January 9, 2025

Struggling with top-heavy short stories? Front-loaded descriptions can sink your pacing. Learn how to balance detail and action in your openings!

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January 9, 2025
Getting Into Their Head: Selecting the Right POV for Your Story
January 7, 2025
Getting Into Their Head: Selecting the Right POV for Your Story
January 7, 2025

Discover how choosing the right POV can transform your storytelling and bring your characters' emotional journeys to life.

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January 7, 2025
Bang! Crash! Splat! Is That Really Writing?
January 2, 2025
Bang! Crash! Splat! Is That Really Writing?
January 2, 2025

Overusing onomatopoeia can turn your story into a comic strip rather than compelling prose. Bang! Choose sound words wisely to elevate your writing.

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January 2, 2025
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Embracing the Zen of Writing Contests
December 31, 2024
Embracing the Zen of Writing Contests
December 31, 2024

Writing contests aren’t about winning—they’re about growing. Compete with yourself, embrace the craft, and connect with a passionate community of writers.

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December 31, 2024
The Magic of Symbolism in Writing
December 26, 2024
The Magic of Symbolism in Writing
December 26, 2024

Add layers to your story with symbolism. Discover how to weave themes into your narrative with objects, events, and characters that speak volumes.

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December 26, 2024
Unlocking the Mystery of Underdeveloped Characters
December 24, 2024
Unlocking the Mystery of Underdeveloped Characters
December 24, 2024

Underdeveloped characters sink stories. Learn how to create rich, relatable personalities that captivate readers and keep them turning the page.

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December 24, 2024
What Makes a Satisfying Ending to a Short Story?
December 19, 2024
What Makes a Satisfying Ending to a Short Story?
December 19, 2024

A satisfying ending lingers. Learn how full-circle, twist, and ambiguous endings can give your short story the resonance it deserves.

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December 19, 2024
Crafting Compelling Character Arcs in Short Stories
December 17, 2024
Crafting Compelling Character Arcs in Short Stories
December 17, 2024

Character arcs add depth to short stories, showing your characters’ growth or transformation. Discover how to craft arcs that resonate with readers!

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December 17, 2024
Showing the Stakes in Flash Fiction and Short Stories
December 12, 2024
Showing the Stakes in Flash Fiction and Short Stories
December 12, 2024

Stakes make your story unforgettable. Show readers what’s at risk, and they’ll stick around to see if your characters triumph—or fall.

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December 12, 2024
Why Emotional Engagement Is the Hallmark of Great Fiction
December 10, 2024
Why Emotional Engagement Is the Hallmark of Great Fiction
December 10, 2024

Craft characters readers care about! Learn how dialogue, monologue, and body language build emotional engagement in your stories.

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December 10, 2024
Writing Stories with Characters Who Have Limited Agency
December 5, 2024
Writing Stories with Characters Who Have Limited Agency
December 5, 2024

Characters need agency to thrive in your story. Without it, they’re passengers, not drivers. Learn how to give your characters the wheel.

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December 5, 2024
Fluffy Cats
December 3, 2024
Fluffy Cats
December 3, 2024

Do writing contests reward fluff? Sometimes. But efficient prose isn’t the enemy—it’s the secret weapon for building pace, tension, and memorable characters.

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December 3, 2024
Trimming the Fat: Cutting Unnecessary Words in Your Writing
November 21, 2024
Trimming the Fat: Cutting Unnecessary Words in Your Writing
November 21, 2024

Cutting unnecessary words helps keep your writing clean and powerful. Here’s how to identify and trim the fluff from your prose.

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November 21, 2024
Keeping Clothing Descriptions in Check for a Stronger Story
November 19, 2024
Keeping Clothing Descriptions in Check for a Stronger Story
November 19, 2024

Over-describing character outfits can bog down your story. Learn when to highlight clothing details and when to let readers fill in the gaps.

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November 19, 2024
Who Is Horwich Cobbleberry?
November 14, 2024
Who Is Horwich Cobbleberry?
November 14, 2024

Horwich Cobbleberry tempts fate yearly with the cursed Keening Cup, a relic said to summon a banshee and reveal one's death. This year, fate may answer back.

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November 14, 2024
Choosing Big vs. Small Words for the Right Impact
November 14, 2024
Choosing Big vs. Small Words for the Right Impact
November 14, 2024

Balancing big and small words in fiction can boost readability and style. Here’s how to make the right choice for your story.

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November 14, 2024
Avoiding “Maid and Butler” Talk for Realistic Dialogue
November 12, 2024
Avoiding “Maid and Butler” Talk for Realistic Dialogue
November 12, 2024

Maid-and-butler talk makes dialogue feel forced and artificial. Learn how to avoid it for more natural conversations in your writing.

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November 12, 2024
Avoiding Passive Voice
November 7, 2024
Avoiding Passive Voice
November 7, 2024

Passive voice can make your writing feel distant and dull. Here’s why you should avoid it—and how to keep your prose engaging and sharp.

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November 7, 2024
Drop Hedging Words to Make Your Writing Stronger
November 5, 2024
Drop Hedging Words to Make Your Writing Stronger
November 5, 2024

Hedging words like ‘maybe’ and ‘kind of’ dilute your writing—here’s why you should cut them out.

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November 5, 2024
Using Caution with Split Infinitives
September 26, 2024
Using Caution with Split Infinitives
September 26, 2024

Master the art of split infinitives! Learn what they are, when to avoid them, and how to correct them to make your writing clearer and smoother.

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September 26, 2024
Watching Your Intensifiers
September 24, 2024
Watching Your Intensifiers
September 24, 2024

Discover how intensifiers supercharge your writing! Learn when to use them for maximum impact and when to avoid overdoing it.

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September 24, 2024
The Gallant Gerund
September 19, 2024
The Gallant Gerund
September 19, 2024

Unlock the gallant power of gerunds! Learn how these action-packed nouns bring dynamic energy and fluidity to your writing, making your sentences truly shine.

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September 19, 2024
Finding the Right Vibe with Verbs
September 17, 2024
Finding the Right Vibe with Verbs
September 17, 2024

Discover the power of verbs and how they drive your stories forward. Master the action, avoid passive voice, and take your writing to the next level!

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September 17, 2024
Understanding Nouns and Pronouns
September 12, 2024
Understanding Nouns and Pronouns
September 12, 2024

Nouns are the building blocks of your sentences, bringing people, places, and things to life in your writing! Get cozy with them and elevate your prose!

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September 12, 2024
Mastering the Basics - Spelling, Grammar, and Punctuation
September 10, 2024
Mastering the Basics - Spelling, Grammar, and Punctuation
September 10, 2024

Master your mechanics—spelling, grammar, and punctuation—so your stories shine and captivate readers without distraction! #WritingTips #NewAuthors

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September 10, 2024
Mechanical Notation in Writing
August 27, 2024
Mechanical Notation in Writing
August 27, 2024

Master mechanical notations in writing to elevate your fiction! Parentheses, brackets, and more—learn how to use them effectively. #WritingSkills

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August 27, 2024
The Art of Breathing in Your Writing
August 22, 2024
The Art of Breathing in Your Writing
August 22, 2024

Master the art of pacing by using pauses in your writing. Learn how to control the rhythm and impact of your story with these simple techniques.

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August 22, 2024
The Oxford Comma: Friend or Foe?
August 20, 2024
The Oxford Comma: Friend or Foe?
August 20, 2024

Wondering if you need the Oxford comma in your writing? Discover why this tiny punctuation mark could be your new best friend!

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August 20, 2024
Behold! The Mighty Comma, Colon, and Semi-Colon
August 15, 2024
Behold! The Mighty Comma, Colon, and Semi-Colon
August 15, 2024

Master the comma, colon, semi-colon, and period to elevate your writing and make your sentences breathe.

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August 15, 2024
Mastering the Ellipsis
August 13, 2024
Mastering the Ellipsis
August 13, 2024

Learn how to use ellipses effectively in your writing and avoid common pitfalls with our easy guide for new authors.

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August 13, 2024
How to Use Em-dashes in Dialogue
August 8, 2024
How to Use Em-dashes in Dialogue
August 8, 2024

Learn how to use em-dashes in dialogue to add realism and depth to your characters' conversations. #WritingTips #DialogueMagic

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August 8, 2024
An Em-dash vs. Comma: What's the Difference?
August 6, 2024
An Em-dash vs. Comma: What's the Difference?
August 6, 2024

Learn when to use an em-dash vs. a comma to control the pace and tone of your writing. #WritingTips #PunctuationMatters

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August 6, 2024
Em-dash, En-dash, and Hyphen: A Quick Guide
August 1, 2024
Em-dash, En-dash, and Hyphen: A Quick Guide
August 1, 2024

Learn the differences between em-dash, en-dash, and hyphen to add clarity and style to your writing. #WritingTips #PunctuationPower

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August 1, 2024
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Cats and Oranges
December 24, 2023
Cats and Oranges
December 24, 2023
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December 24, 2023
Who is Ginny Greenhill?
December 7, 2023
Who is Ginny Greenhill?
December 7, 2023
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December 7, 2023
Who is Benzie Fernbottom
April 25, 2023
Who is Benzie Fernbottom
April 25, 2023
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April 25, 2023
Author’s Note: Soso
April 12, 2023
Author’s Note: Soso
April 12, 2023
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April 12, 2023
Who is Artemis Teafellow?
March 28, 2023
Who is Artemis Teafellow?
March 28, 2023
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March 28, 2023
Memories in Amber
March 3, 2023
Memories in Amber
March 3, 2023
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March 3, 2023
Author’s Note: The Magnificent Maron Maloney
March 2, 2023
Author’s Note: The Magnificent Maron Maloney
March 2, 2023
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March 2, 2023
Author’s Note: Return to Me
February 23, 2023
Author’s Note: Return to Me
February 23, 2023
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February 23, 2023
Who is Godwick Emberfoot
February 14, 2023
Who is Godwick Emberfoot
February 14, 2023
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February 14, 2023
What is the Difference Between the Commercial and Non-Commercial Versions of my Work?
January 27, 2023
What is the Difference Between the Commercial and Non-Commercial Versions of my Work?
January 27, 2023
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January 27, 2023
Author’s Notes: The Garden of Reflection
January 24, 2023
Author’s Notes: The Garden of Reflection
January 24, 2023
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January 24, 2023
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5 Things I Avoid as a Fantasy Author
December 18, 2022
5 Things I Avoid as a Fantasy Author
December 18, 2022
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December 18, 2022
Author’s Note: The Murkwode Reaving
November 25, 2022
Author’s Note: The Murkwode Reaving
November 25, 2022
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November 25, 2022
Why I Write Short Stories and Novellas
November 24, 2022
Why I Write Short Stories and Novellas
November 24, 2022
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November 24, 2022
Dumbria
November 18, 2022
Dumbria
November 18, 2022
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November 18, 2022
Auchenshuggle
November 18, 2022
Auchenshuggle
November 18, 2022
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November 18, 2022
Mumling
November 18, 2022
Mumling
November 18, 2022
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November 18, 2022
Aevalorn Parishes
November 18, 2022
Aevalorn Parishes
November 18, 2022
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November 18, 2022
Trelalee
November 18, 2022
Trelalee
November 18, 2022
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November 18, 2022
Brigantia
November 18, 2022
Brigantia
November 18, 2022
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November 18, 2022
Nodderton
November 18, 2022
Nodderton
November 18, 2022
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November 18, 2022
Who is Kindle Muckwalker?
November 18, 2022
Who is Kindle Muckwalker?
November 18, 2022
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November 18, 2022
Who is Joliver Barleywood?
November 18, 2022
Who is Joliver Barleywood?
November 18, 2022
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November 18, 2022
What is a Book?
November 18, 2022
What is a Book?
November 18, 2022
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November 18, 2022
Author’s Note: Love’s Repast
November 17, 2022
Author’s Note: Love’s Repast
November 17, 2022
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November 17, 2022
Author’s Notes: The Knave of Nodderton, Episodes 7, 8, and 9
November 7, 2022
Author’s Notes: The Knave of Nodderton, Episodes 7, 8, and 9
November 7, 2022
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November 7, 2022
Author’s Note: The Pig King
October 25, 2022
Author’s Note: The Pig King
October 25, 2022
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October 25, 2022
Author’s Note: The Knave of Nodderton, Episode 6
October 14, 2022
Author’s Note: The Knave of Nodderton, Episode 6
October 14, 2022
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October 14, 2022
Who is Maedrey Puck?
October 14, 2022
Who is Maedrey Puck?
October 14, 2022
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October 14, 2022
Author’s Note: The Knave of Nodderton, Episodes 4 & 5
October 8, 2022
Author’s Note: The Knave of Nodderton, Episodes 4 & 5
October 8, 2022
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October 8, 2022
Author’s Note: The Knave of Nodderton, Episode 3
October 1, 2022
Author’s Note: The Knave of Nodderton, Episode 3
October 1, 2022
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October 1, 2022
Author’s Note: Piskie Sticks
September 30, 2022
Author’s Note: Piskie Sticks
September 30, 2022
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September 30, 2022
Author’s Note: The Knave of Nodderton, Episode 1
September 24, 2022
Author’s Note: The Knave of Nodderton, Episode 1
September 24, 2022
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September 24, 2022
Author’s Note: The Grotesque of Silvanus
September 23, 2022
Author’s Note: The Grotesque of Silvanus
September 23, 2022
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September 23, 2022
Author’s Note: A Thyme of Trouble
September 23, 2022
Author’s Note: A Thyme of Trouble
September 23, 2022
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September 23, 2022
Who is Elina Hogsbreath?
September 19, 2022
Who is Elina Hogsbreath?
September 19, 2022
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September 19, 2022
Who is Jayleigh Warmhollow?
September 15, 2022
Who is Jayleigh Warmhollow?
September 15, 2022
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September 15, 2022
Who is Skyer Dannon?
September 15, 2022
Who is Skyer Dannon?
September 15, 2022
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September 15, 2022
Who is Gammond Brandyford?
September 15, 2022
Who is Gammond Brandyford?
September 15, 2022
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September 15, 2022
Author’s Note: Goblet of Bone, Episode 3
September 3, 2022
Author’s Note: Goblet of Bone, Episode 3
September 3, 2022

A discussion about the third episode of A Goblet of Bone, published on Wattpad.

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September 3, 2022
Author’s Note: Goblet of Bone, Episode 2
August 29, 2022
Author’s Note: Goblet of Bone, Episode 2
August 29, 2022

A discussion about the second episode/chapter two, of A Goblet of Bone and why Brigantia is structured the way it is for telling the story.

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August 29, 2022

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